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Kailo Realism Eye Practice

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Yeup. I suck.

Anyways, i'm proud of the eye. It looks quit real.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I will try to be as thoughtful as possible.
Pros:
The eye itself is splendid. I love the way you shaded it and the detail, it really looks as if you put a lot of thought into it. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> The lines and the shine are VERY realistic, as if it were a real cat's.
Cons:
The black near the eye shows out a bit too much. (you could maybe try to cover it with some more fur or make it fade in etc.) The fur is definitely scribbled in, which is quite normal, but not realistic. The fur above the eyes needs some work. I'd suggest making the fur layers semi-transparent, to make it fit in more. Also, the green marking needs to be blended in more. I like the shading, but you should shade everything a bit more.




It's overall a great piece, and I look forward to more.





Peace,
Goldy